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A Dilema for Donna
Author: Petricia
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(Added on Feb 11, 2008)
(This month 40217 readers) (Total 88114 readers) |
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A new divorcee attends a cocktail party and gets placed into an increasing difficult situation. |
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| Reviewer:
Martiniman
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Dec 25, 2011 |
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This is a fabulous story up to this point. It would be wonderful to have it finished! (10/10)
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titsy [President]
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Jun 5, 2011 |
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Playful, with believable characters. Loved the thoughts in Donna's head, really added to the realism. (10/10)
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Dryhill
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Mar 16, 2010 |
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Another good story. I hope we are going to see more of these two. (10/10)
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JimmyJump
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Dec 21, 2008 |
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Captivating little story. Nice pace, good characterizations. Great.
JJ (10/10)
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MasterBaron1945
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Dec 17, 2008 |
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again I like the gradualization
you do this well
keep them coming (9/10)
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Ninva
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Nov 23, 2008 |
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Quite nice, thank you. (9/10)
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Kev
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Feb 26, 2008 |
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Looking forward to more of this. Well written and I could really visualize the scene and the girls. Top notch (9/10)
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dadisch
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Feb 22, 2008 |
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What an excelent start,Please dont be long with the continuation. You are a superb writer who allows the reader to clearly visualise the scene. (10/10)
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msnaughtygrrl
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Feb 22, 2008 |
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Very well done Petricia, you've got me hooked right along with Donna .. I can't wait to find out where this is going. (9/10)
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MMerkle
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Feb 18, 2008 |
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Very good start. Can not wait to read more. Hopefully this is not the last. (10/10)
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rilawild
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Feb 16, 2008 |
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An excellent start to what could be a great story. I'm looking forward to more. I liked the character development, both Donna and Lauren are more than two dimensional people. Keep up the good work. (10/10)
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chksng19
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Feb 16, 2008 |
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A lovely start... can't wait for more. (10/10)
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VladPotemkin
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Feb 15, 2008 |
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Excellent start. Looking forward to reading more of Donna's perilous situation. (10/10)
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azrlg17
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Feb 15, 2008 |
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Very hot and the action hasn't even started yet. The only thing I don't like is that Donna should have been chained to some object and gagged immediately. It isn't rocket science to sit down and move your hands under your butt to the front when they are handcuffed behind your back. And that's usually one of the first things people try. And then she can put something over the cuffs and can leave discreetly. (9/10)
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sub_for_you
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Feb 15, 2008 |
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Finally! An absolutely fabulous sexy f/f story! Love the pacing. Hope this is a long one! Lucky Donna! She's about to get it! (10/10)
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jens
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Feb 14, 2008 |
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Very good and interesting!!! (10/10)
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mkemse
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Feb 13, 2008 |
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outstanding (10/10)
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mda073
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Feb 12, 2008 |
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Evcellent story, very well written and I can't wait for the next chapter. (10/10)
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