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Weekend Capture
Author: Warren
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(Added on Jan 29, 2008)
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Cheerleader is captured and toyed with |
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Average (?):  (6.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
slvWriting
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Feb 3, 2008 |
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Not bad at all. It's best thing is the suspense it builds. Could well use a re-reading to get all those grammar and punctuation errors out of the story.
Hope there is a second part, the ending of the story makes it seem there will be a second part indeed. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
PuppyDoog
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Feb 1, 2008 |
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Besides the occasional grammar errors (confusion of your and you're, for example), this was an enjoyable story. What really caught my eye and got me excited was the use of second-person. As I am a submissive, it really got me into the story so that I could put myself into the victim's place. Please continue with more parts! (7/10)
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