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Lisa = Torture
Author: Black
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(Added on Jan 29, 2008)
(This month 53836 readers) (Total 74129 readers) |
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When Lisa discovers that her best friend is working for a wealthy underground trade she wants in on the money. But the job they give her isn\'t what she expected, and now she must go through with it and harm the one person she loves the most. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (6/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
Curtis
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Feb 5, 2008 |
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Not bad, but could use some work. Lots of 'wrong word' errors ('there' for 'their', etc) and some odd use of commas. Probably the most unrealistic premise I've seen in months, and most especially WRONG CODES. This story is F/m, not M/f as advertised, and cbt should've been included as well. All that aside, the story was hot, and it got me hard (though not off). I hope to read more from this author. (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
susankarl
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Feb 3, 2008 |
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Loved the story. Hope that girl works a lot more. She would be able to retire soon if I was employing her.
Nice humour. Nice idea. When are the two girls going to work together on a pretty woman to please me ?
Susan. (7/10)
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