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Average (?):  (6.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Nemz
(Edit) |
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Feb 3, 2008 |
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Very interesting and amusing story. The action and plot kept me wanting to read, and the first part of the story has definitely made me want to read further chapters. The only thing I would complain about is the writing style. I would suggest fixing the formatting into more organized paragraphs. I would also suggest adding a bit more detail and working on some of the transitions. Over all, very good. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
russianguy26
(Edit) (Feb 3, 2008)
- I want to say several words about all my stories. English in them can be not to good, because I'm a russian guy and my native language is russian, not english. We don't speak english here at all and I try my best. Some phrases are too hard for me to put in english due to minority of english words... Without any offence!!!
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