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Tennis Whites
Author: Major Falconer
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(Added on Dec 8, 2001)
(This month 49934 readers) (Total 65356 readers) |
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Man takes lesbian and her young friend in changing rooms. |
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Average (?):  (5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
iaf4242
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Dec 29, 2002 |
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More detail is needed to develop even these characters. (4/10)
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| Reviewer:
hyphen666
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Dec 9, 2001 |
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This story is just too trite for my taste. There is no doubt that the author can write, but why waste one's talent on a hackneyed plot peopled with stereotypical characters? I am sure you are capable of doing much better. I look forward to a convincing demonstration in the very near future. (5/10)
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