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fragile party property
Author: HH
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(Added on Jan 3, 2008)
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She likes submission, she submits at a party, the beginning of life as property. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (7/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
littlebabycrystal
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Feb 17, 2009 |
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Guess who this is? I love it. Thank YOU for owning me. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Jan 4, 2008 |
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i liked the story but the chapters or part were to short, liked to tried to get 1 whole sotry done at 1 time (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
Mad Lews
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Jan 4, 2008 |
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A firmer grasp of paragraph structure would make for an easier read. the use of Part(X) labels begins to look like paragraph breaks but is dropped. Verb tenses slide back and forth. Despite all that the story is interesting; though I must say up to this point crystal seems to have no idea of the difference between submission and being abused. (6/10)
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