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The Storyteller
Author: J.
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(Added on Dec 6, 2001)
(This month 67893 readers) (Total 88893 readers) |
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A couple read sadistic stories on the Internet and fantasize about them. Then she meets the author. |
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Average (?):  (6.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Apr 4, 2006 |
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i enjoyedthe story and the detailes (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
La Toya
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Apr 29, 2005 |
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Sorry J but this is not as good as other stories you have done (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
Lindalooking
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Dec 2, 2004 |
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One of the best stories online, a truly evil and kinky plot line that only J could imagine. He truly does an excellent job of creating a true fantasy that only the wicked really can appreciate. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Curtis
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Jul 13, 2003 |
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I'm beginning to believe that J. has been rummaging about in my book of fantasies. This is two of his stories that have been near copies of mine. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Amber
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Jul 10, 2003 |
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I loved it! (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Nitrofox
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Jan 9, 2003 |
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Bleagh. This is pathetic. No plot really, the husband is someone I'd like to shoot, and the other guy is just weird. This was the type of story you sometimes see written by schoolchildren. "First he did this, then he did that. Then she did the other thing ...", etc. The story had promise for about, oh, the first line. Also, crappy ending. I've seen stories that had bad endings, but this was just beyond bad. Unrealistic as well. Why in the hell would they want to amputate? Isn't that rather ... pointless? What use is she then? This is followed by an absolutely RIDICULOUS little line about how she didn't care that they wanted to amputate. All she cares about is whether her asshole husband would like that tatoos. Oh yea, real realistic. If I had to grade this, I'd say F- was being generous. (1/10)
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| Reviewer:
sluggard
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Dec 17, 2001 |
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Love the premise, the tattooing & piercing always works for me, but why the allusoins to amputations at the end. What use would a slave be then. More characterisation would be good . All in all a good story as far as I am concerned. More please. (8/10)
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ownedgirl
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Dec 6, 2001 |
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Congratulations to this author for creating a semi-fresh plot fo a bdsm story. This is very hard to do these days! Complete shame on the author for taking that very good idea and writing a story with NO character development,NO detail, and ZERO plausibility!! A total waste of a good idea... (2/10)
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