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Johnny and Doris
Author: H. Dean
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(Added on Dec 30, 2007)
(This month 13329 readers) (Total 20457 readers) |
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Two disgusting people meet in a disgusting bar and commit a disgusting act. With any luck, anyone who reads this story will feel a need for a good shower. |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
Average
Rating:  (8.5/10) |
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okay really?
(Edit) |
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Oct 11, 2011 |
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I laughed my ass off on the last lines. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
H Dean
(Edit) (Oct 12, 2011)
- Had you seen me as I wrote this bit of filth you would have thought I had lost my mind. I wrote it in a single sitting in about 15 minutes. The entire time I was giggling like a school girl. It was written for an erotic writing contest. I didn't win. But I should have.
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| Reviewer:
jep33
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Jan 25, 2008 |
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Well, this is a nice diversion for a snowy afternoon. Good writing. Good word descriptions. A nice touch of humor. Many years ago in Southern Illinois, I actually experienced a few bars and patrons just about like these. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
H Dean
(Edit) (Jan 27, 2008)
- Thanks for dropping by and offering your review. I hoped to capture the feel of a few of the sleazier places with this tale. I also hoped to get a few chuckles. Nice to know I managed to do both.
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chksng19
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Jan 4, 2008 |
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*Off to the side... "Hey, lover? Could you pass me that bottle of alcohol hand sanitizer? I've got to pour it over my head!"*
Thoroughly disgusting indeed. And a nice twist to make me smile (more broadly, if possible). Fun, short, filthy, and perfect. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
H Dean
(Edit) (Jan 4, 2008)
- Thank you so much for stopping by and reading this bit of fun. I am glad you found it as humorous and disgusting as I intended. Thanks for the high rating, as well.
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heycarrieanne
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Jan 3, 2008 |
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{{humming}} and it burns burns burns, that ring of fire ... that ring of fire!! (8/10)
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- Replied by:
H Dean
(Edit) (Jan 3, 2008)
- Don't take your guns to town, John, leave your guns at home, son. Don't take your guns to town.
Glad ya liked it. But only an 8? You're killin' me.
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mkemse
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Jan 3, 2008 |
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not bad, a bit dsifferent, love your descrition and your synposis
Everyone is different in their writing interests, this was a bit different (8/10)
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- Replied by:
H Dean
(Edit) (Jan 1, 2008)
- Thanks for stopping by this bit of filth I put together. It wasn't much but it sure was fun to write.
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| Reviewer:
Mad Lews
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Dec 31, 2007 |
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(still dripping from the shower.)
Well that was a tasteful tale. A romantic comedy along the lines of Johnny Depp's new musical only without the singing, slit throats, and redeeming social value.I was with you through the stench, the piss dampened floor, even the anal rape, butt what kind of writer would allow characters to smoke in a place of public gathering? Children could be exposed to that vile habit!!!
Dean you disgust me.
Mad Lews (9/10)
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- Replied by:
H Dean
(Edit) (Dec 31, 2007)
- Why thank you, Mr Lews. So nice of you to bother with this piece of filth. You must know that, after beig associated with your kind, and for so long, that it was only a matter of time before I wrote about...well, your kind. Anyway, thank you for being this story's first reviewer. It does my heart wonders that you have. (Shaddup, I know I don't have a heart)
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