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Priceless
Author: velvetglove
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(Added on Dec 22, 2007)
(This month 73870 readers) (Total 114862 readers) |
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A seasonal short story. (one-part only) |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (9/10) |
Average
Rating:  (9.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Feb 8, 2009 |
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Had to tie myself to a chair to force myself to read this, as male submission is not 'ma thang, dahlin'...
Then (after my sexy neighbour had to come and untie me, which didn't give her the impression I had planned to make on her), I thought about not reviewing it, as I couldn't for the love of whatever voodoo bullshit you hang on to, come up with a decent recapitulation.
So, I decided to write a whole lot of nothingness and end the litany with "I didn't like the story but I love velvetgloves scribblings and this is another great example of his/her abilities".
Which I just did.
JJ (9/10)
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- Replied by:
velvetglove
(Edit) (Feb 10, 2009)
- Hi Jimmy,
Thanks again for your reviews of this and other stories. I'm always pleased when people review and rate stories which aren't their thang. I'm an equal opportunities scribbler; both males and females (of all ethnicities and types) get their chance to dom and sub, alone, and side by side. I hope your neighbour looked after you. Velvetglove
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0133lai
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May 6, 2008 |
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Love the fireman character! (10/10)
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FootSlaveE
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Feb 17, 2008 |
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Hey man, WOW another great story! I can't wait to read more. You are the best. You really get into the character's heads. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
velvetglove
(Edit) (Mar 7, 2008)
- Hi E, thanks for the comment and rating. Hi all, I've tried without success to have my author's blurb updated, so I'll use this 'reply' instead. There will be no updates to Priceless for a while. I am writing a new story that I hope to start posting in April.
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| Reviewer:
strict_master
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Jan 14, 2008 |
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Velvet, you completely rock! I love all your stories and this is a great one! It is very edgy and the humiliation of the slaves' predicament is beautifully described. I can see the predicament worsening and the slavery deepening with the upcoming events. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
velvetglove
(Edit) (Jan 18, 2008)
- Strict, Thanks for your comments and rating. Hope you enjoyed Part 5. More coming. V.
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| Reviewer:
Rocky
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Jan 13, 2008 |
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One of my favorite authors, and one of the best stories thus far. I'm not sure what it would take to rate a 10, but keep the chapters coming and I might just do it. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
velvetglove
(Edit) (Jan 13, 2008)
- Thanks Rocky. I hope you enjoy the remaining chapters. Velvetglove
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Jan 3, 2008 |
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lloved every aspect of it (9/10)
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- Replied by:
velvetglove
(Edit) (Jan 13, 2008)
- Thanks mkemse. I've got some more in the pipeline and a couple of new stories planned for later in 2008. Velvetglove
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Anne4humiliation
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Dec 30, 2007 |
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Rather strong on the humiliation side (which is the way I like it). I especially like the tone chosen for the first person narrator. Great story. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
velvetglove
(Edit) (Jan 13, 2008)
- Thanks Anne. The humiliation's going to get worse.
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| Reviewer:
nikita
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Dec 29, 2007 |
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I liked the descriptions of the blonde. That vision of her walking down the aisle after her wedding made me want to see her knocked down a few notches. If the flavor of the rest of the tale could be sustained, it could do justice to the punchline. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
velvetglove
(Edit) (Jan 13, 2008)
- Thanks Nikita.
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| Reviewer:
Mad Lews
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Dec 26, 2007 |
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A decent story in a rude crude sort of way. Still a long way to go for a predictable punch line (8/10)
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