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A Severe Birching
Author: Nightshade
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(Added on Dec 22, 2007)
(This month 65953 readers) (Total 80028 readers) |
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The sentencing of two delinquents. Place the English Channel Island of Gurnsey. At a time when birching, was frequently used a deterrent. Names and a few details changed. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (5/10) |
Average
Rating:  (4.5/10) |
Highest
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| Reviewer:
serendipity101
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Dec 31, 2007 |
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Simply the most poorly edited story I've attempted to read. And no, I didn't read the entire story given that the grammar and spelling made it too difficult. (1/10)
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chksng19
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Dec 31, 2007 |
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An abuse of the Queen's English, if I've ever seen one. Did you proof-read this AT ALL? You are losing lots of scoring points for that major problem. It was interesting, but painful to read.
Later, the second section is loaded; simply a reload of the first. (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
Anne4humiliation
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Dec 30, 2007 |
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Certainly a story only for the birching enthusiast. Little eroticism, but straight birching in a legal context. The writing is very negligent, unfinished sentenced and breaks in the syntax make it hard to read. (5/10)
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schoolboylv
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Dec 23, 2007 |
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Would be a 9 or 10 if there were not so many spelling/grammar errors. Find an editor please for your next peice.... (7/10)
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