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      Average (?):  (6.5/10) |   
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    | Reviewer: 
    Dryhill
  (Edit) | Rating:  | Sep 23, 2012 |   
    |  | A little bit more about the characters emotions (yes we know the writer was hesitant about the lesbianism b ut was she shaking with fear, did she have buttewrflies in her stomache?) would have been nice. Do write some more about these three, do they eventually live together? (7/10) 
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    | Reviewer: 
    Elkor
  (Edit) | Rating:  | Dec 21, 2007 |   
    |  | While the diary writing style is interesting, but more as a summary than a story itself. It lacks depth to really capture the reader. This would be a good "Chapter 0" where each Chapter is a more detailed accounting of the entries in Chapter 0.   (6/10)
 
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    | Reviewer: 
    Rocky
  (Edit) | Rating:  | Dec 15, 2007 |   
    |  | This one has a lot of potential, and I'd like to see you continue.  Personally, I like the writing style; it's very readable, and I prefer it to the "Dear Diary" format. (8/10) 
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    | Reviewer: 
    mkemse
  (Edit) | Rating:  | Dec 15, 2007 |   
    |  | the story was ok, enjoyable to read only wish you had not done it in a diary or journa;l style wrtiting, but ever aurthor has their own style (6/10) 
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