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Model Bus
Author: Susan Karlson
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(Added on Dec 1, 2007)
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Captured beauty contestants' coach full of lovely girls destined to be tortured to death. |
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| Reviewer:
mike uk reader
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Feb 7, 2009 |
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A long awaited story from the one and only "Susan" is most welcome indeed to this site.
I feel that perhaps Chistmas has come early for myself.
Once again in my opinion you have produced another
extreme piece of erotic fiction that flows wonderfully well.
The humiliations and helplessness of the young victims were incredible and conveyed to the reader beautifully.
If you still have my e-mail address please contact me,I would love chat with you again.
Never-the less, my sincere best wishes are sent with a top rating.
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For PART TWO - Just Excellent once again after a very long absence and greatly missed from this site. Well done you are simply the best without doubt. 10/10 again. (10/10)
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mkemse
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Jul 20, 2008 |
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real good (9/10)
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Venom
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Dec 4, 2007 |
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The detailed descriptions, starting with the coach, then be found again at the main characters' backgrounds, raise our hopes for another epic pain story. I'm convinced that it will be as outstanding as its predecessors. (9/10)
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Sub 90
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Dec 3, 2007 |
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At last a believable story and excellent scenario. Are you a coach driver by any chance. Please don't keep us waiting too long for the next chapters. Contact me if you need inspiration as I have several part written stories which could mesh well with your filthy perverted mind.LOL. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
susankarl
(Edit) (Dec 3, 2007)
- Thanks for your review, though I hardly think "believable" is the word. Can you imagine the police activity if a real coach full of girls were to be hi-jacked?
Always enjoy ideas, sometimes "pinching" a novel twist to use, so don't be shy. Do mail me if you wish.
Susan.
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