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A Simple Two Week Get Away
Author: Blackdog
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(Added on Nov 28, 2007)
(This month 11641 readers) (Total 20629 readers) |
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Carol Jackson is an up an coming political activist. She had been instrumental in exposing political graft on both sides of the aisle. |
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Average (?):  (4.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
csr
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Oct 17, 2008 |
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Skimmed it... looks like it may be alright, but I can't read single-paragraph stories. Even if you *randomly* hit the return key once in a while, it would be preferable to this. I'm insulted that you would even expect us to put that kind of effort into a simple read. (2/10)
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| Reviewer:
Razor7826
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Mar 17, 2008 |
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Significant formatting errors makes the story very difficult to read. There is the mentioned paragraphing problems, but also improper formatting for dialogue.
On the positive side, I like the premise, and is similar to one of my own that I am working in. Your stories really are showing improvement as time goes on. (4/10)
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| Reviewer:
slaveneedledick
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Dec 1, 2007 |
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Paragraphing would help and the background changed to white. Very difficult to read. (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Nov 28, 2007 |
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1 long paragraph, yellow backgrown makes it hard ot read (5/10)
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susankarl
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Nov 28, 2007 |
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A good mass rape story. Shame the layout was so poor. Hit "format" and it would be much nicer to read.
For my perverse tastes, they could have tortured her for pleasure, but I look forward to reading how she is treated after nine months. Hope we do not have to wait that long. Susan. (6/10)
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