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The Room of Mr. DePaul
Author: SeaHunter
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(Added on Nov 27, 2007)
(This month 9952 readers) (Total 15641 readers) |
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A young woman cleans the room of Mr. DePaul. |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Oct 7, 2010 |
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Story with high aspirations, which sadly doesn't deliver. Well written, yes, but there's too much vagueness to really get into what's been written.
Characters are too flat as well, because of the shortness of the story.
Nice try, but room for improvement still.
JJ (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Jan 9, 2009 |
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story show you do not need hard mateiral in allstories for it to be good (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
ramses
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Dec 1, 2007 |
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Even though I generally prefer harder stories, I found this one highly erotic. (9/10)
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