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Used as a Prize
Author: nightporter
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(Added on Nov 27, 2007)
(This month 10306 readers) (Total 21717 readers) |
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A middle aged wife is put forward to be used and abused by a group of men during an afternoon card session. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (6/10) |
Average
Rating:  (6.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Oct 7, 2010 |
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Excerpt of a figment of nightporter's imagination, I suspect. But it works.
Yes, it's a bit short, and yes, it's lacking in detail, but on the other hand, this is just a short glance --a snapshot-- behind someone's curtains. As such, it doesn't need any more details. Else one should rewrite the thing and make a complete story out of it.
Now, what's here is just that glimpse. Well written too.
That should suffice, sometimes.
JJ (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
gerolf
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Dec 3, 2007 |
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too short and not detailed enough - no real story in here. would be much better to detail how they decide who gets to do what. and why the 4th man can just take her, without winning. (4/10)
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| Reviewer:
Curtis
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Dec 2, 2007 |
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I would normally have only given this a '6', but having just slogged through four stories that other critics rated '9' that I wouldn't read to my dog, I decided to cut some slack here. No gross spelling, grammar or punctuation errors here, and at least it got my dick up (if not off). Relatively realistic portrayal of the effects and aftereffects of the abise, which is nice for a change, but no inkling of why the woman found herself in this position. Can't tell if more will be added later, or if it's a standalone story. (7/10)
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