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Jim becomes the Adminstrator
Author: Terrible Tomas
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(Added on Nov 27, 2007)
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Jim gets the job as a school adminstrator for a post high school. This school deals with all the dropouts. Jim uses sex to make the students follow the rules. His assistants also take pictures of everything and it does get interesting. |
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| Reviewer:
CaptainBlack
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Dec 8, 2007 |
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Needs a total rewrite, bad grammar, totally wrong words used (though instead of thought), bad spelling (dos instead of does).
Far too many grammar mistakes to mention here.
Repeated use of pet phrases ...... such as..... XXX then does..... XXX does......
Wrong use of gender..... "Jim takes this opportunity to eat Debbie. She explodes in her mouth, and she is a bit loud"
Just plain bad (1/10)
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