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The Yearly Hunt
Author: Connie Miller
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(Added on Nov 28, 2001)
(This month 57414 readers) (Total 83469 readers) |
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Each year we would meet at my cabin and bring along a kidnapped girl. We would all abuse them and keep their holes in good used shape. I myself am a tit man and my bitch really got some sore tits. |
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Average (?):  (6/10) |
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| Reviewer:
d1ll1gaf
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Sep 28, 2014 |
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I must disagree with hyphen666's review, the details of this story is what makes it good. While the structure could use some improvement the story as a whole is entirely readable. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
hyphen666
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Nov 28, 2001 |
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The author's writing style is strictly high school level with way too much unnecessary detail contained within his choppy sentences. There is plenty of unjustified, mindless abuse of females if you are into that sort of thing. On the other hand this is not bad for the first effort of someone who is probably an extremely young man who hasn't been properly housebroken. Try making this story half its length, you'll learn a lot by this exercise. (4/10)
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