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The Demonstration
Author: nightporter
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(Added on Nov 14, 2007)
(This month 53746 readers) (Total 75259 readers) |
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A young girl is punished in class by being used as a demonstration of sexual education given by her adult teacher. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (8/10) |
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| Reviewer:
underwhere
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Feb 24, 2008 |
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The story was a delight to read. I particularly liked how Lucy got a lot more than she bargained for out of her antics. However, I did find the story a little difficult to read. Its more of a cosmetic thing rather than the writing itself, but paragraphs more easily separated would have made this a little easier to read and follow. Looking forward to reading part 2 if there is one. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
marci
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Nov 19, 2007 |
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i was very impressed with this story. i have fantasies about similar situations happening to me. this story made me hot. (9/10)
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