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Halloween Creep Night
Author: redwrangler
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(Added on Nov 4, 2007)
(This month 11329 readers) (Total 23865 readers) |
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Sorority Pledge does the doodie bag trick or treat on old cranky teachers porch for Halloween. |
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| Reviewer:
CarolinaSpanker
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Oct 3, 2012 |
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I thought you did a good job and told an interesting story. Farting during a hard spanking is certainly a credible outcome. (8/10)
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chksng19
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Nov 9, 2007 |
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Not really terribly sexy in any way, and lots of grammatical errors. If you plan to use a term, take the time to look up the proper form: a Sorority has Greek letters as its name. A D Pi is right in the third segment, Pi, but should be Alpha Delta instead of A D. One way or the other, but not both. (5/10)
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mkemse
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Nov 8, 2007 |
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the story is average at best, it is not terrible but I found nothing real eoric in it, bit holiday erotic stories are difficult to do (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
ElectricBadger
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Nov 7, 2007 |
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Good idea and shows a lot of potential, but needs a thorough re-write for clarity -- too many run-ons, punctuation errors and disjointed bits to be as enjoyable as it could be. Please edit and resubmit, I'd love to see it improved! (5/10)
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