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Birthday Desires
Author: painie
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(Added on Oct 17, 2007)
(This month 50404 readers) (Total 56507 readers) |
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A fantasy I had made true by my Master. |
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Average (?):  (5.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Jul 20, 2008 |
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ok, but needs more detail (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
chksng19
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Oct 20, 2007 |
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A nice fantasy, detracted from by the nature of the telling. Things are quickly over, with insufficient description. This tale should be reformatted and then rewritten, taking time to expand and add more elements to the tale. (5/10)
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