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Trading Up
Author: Dirty Old Pervert
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(Added on Oct 3, 2007)
(This month 52279 readers) (Total 83936 readers) |
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This is the story of Amanda, the unfortunate young female whose parents unexpectedly decided to trade her in to the FemBoutique for a fully trained sex slave. |
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Average (?):  (9/10) |
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| Reviewer:
NaughtyNora
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Dec 3, 2007 |
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I love it DOP. You've known that since the first time you told it to me. Keep 'em coming! Love always, Nora. (10/10)
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mkemse
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Oct 16, 2007 |
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i enjoyed the story, foundi t both entertaining and erotic (8/10)
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bmtphoenix
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Oct 11, 2007 |
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Excellent, MORE! You have a way of going very quickly while still being more than descriptive enough and inventive to boot! (10/10)
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blossom
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Oct 9, 2007 |
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wow, what a story. i love the way the mothers plan back fired and now she gets to experience what her daughter has to go through. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Nikolaj
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Oct 7, 2007 |
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Very pleasant story. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
DirtyOldPervert
(Edit) (Oct 7, 2007)
- Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
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| Reviewer:
chksng19
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Oct 7, 2007 |
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A well told short-short, enough to be free-standing if that's all there is. But I hope not. Or, perhaps, other stories told in that world? Thanks for the entertainment... and for your "afterward" before the story. It's good to know there are SOME other sane people in the world! (9/10)
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- Replied by:
DirtyOldPervert
(Edit) (Oct 7, 2007)
- I'm glad you enjoyed the story, and thank you for reading my political rant. It was originally intended to go at the end of the story instead of the beginning, but it probably works better at the beginning. The only problem is now it's a foreword, not an afterword. That, and on this site I'm probably preaching to the choir.
Anyway, thank you for the review.
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| Reviewer:
heycarrieanne
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Oct 5, 2007 |
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Very nicely written, even if I did figure the mom would be traded in, too. You did have several typos though ... (8/10)
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DirtyOldPervert
(Edit) (Oct 6, 2007)
- Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed the story. Sorry about the typos.
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| Reviewer:
soulcatch
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Oct 5, 2007 |
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Love the story. Really enjoy stories where females get trapped in bondage. so I really enjoyed end. Would love to see more chapters
(9/10)
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- Replied by:
DirtyOldPervert
(Edit) (Oct 6, 2007)
- Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed the story.
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| Reviewer:
mirage
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Oct 4, 2007 |
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interesting start, would like to see more chapters.
I like short story. easy to finish reading in minutes. The wordings seem comfortable enough. (7/10)
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- Replied by:
DirtyOldPervert
(Edit) (Oct 6, 2007)
- Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed the story.
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| Reviewer:
npatek
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Oct 4, 2007 |
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I like your story very much. It's a hot thought of being turned in for resale. And I like the character of the Evil Queen of the mum.
In Germany prostitution is legal since a few years. It's an ordinary job, for which you can (must) pay taxes. When it was legalized, it was discussed, if that meant that there needed to be an official job training and that the public employment center was bound to place unemployeed people into prostitution. But I think no unemployed is urged into this job until now.
Of course this has nothing to do with slavery. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
DirtyOldPervert
(Edit) (Oct 6, 2007)
- Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed the story. Now, let me go buy a plane ticket to Germany. :)
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| Reviewer:
Razor7826
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Oct 4, 2007 |
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Very good, but a bit brief and underdeveloped. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
DirtyOldPervert
(Edit) (Oct 6, 2007)
- I'm glad you enjoyed the story. If your preference is for longer stories with more detailed plots (possibly at the expense of "action") then you might enjoy The State by The Odd Side of Jeff (on this site) or The Ordinance by Spoonbender (http://www.asstr.org/files/Collections/Alt.Sex.Stories.Moderated/Year1998/7777.txt)
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Razor7826
(Edit) (Mar 16, 2008)
- The problem isn't the length, but that the final twist and the emotions of both involved seems kind of random, considering how their relationship was developed.
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| Reviewer:
ramses
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Oct 4, 2007 |
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Just great. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
DirtyOldPervert
(Edit) (Oct 6, 2007)
- Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed the story.
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| Reviewer:
Piers
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Oct 4, 2007 |
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What fun! And what a twist at the end!! I can't wait for th erest of the story. You've outdone yourself. Wonderful!! (8/10)
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- Replied by:
DirtyOldPervert
(Edit) (Oct 6, 2007)
- Thank you for the kind feedback; I'm glad you enjoyed the story. I'm afraid that what I posted is the complete story -- no additional chapters are planned. I am, however, currently working on a sequel.
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