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Lisa Submits
Author: Wyllow
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(Added on Sep 30, 2007)
(This month 10186 readers) (Total 26840 readers) |
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Lisa is kidnapped and made to submit to an unknown man. |
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Weighed
Average (?): (7/10) |
Average
Rating: (7.5/10) |
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Reviewer:
bmtphoenix
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Oct 11, 2007 |
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Nice. A bit bland, not particularly inventive, and I feel there's no way she would've been calling him sir without realizing it that soon, but I will be watching for the next part and my rating could change. :) (7/10)
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Reviewer:
chksng19
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Oct 4, 2007 |
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Nicely crafted, though slightly rough in places. A romantic tale of D/s! Thank you for sharing it. (8/10)
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Reviewer:
ThisYouWillDo
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Oct 3, 2007 |
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Hi An enjoyable fantasy. Thanks! TYWD (7/10)
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