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The James Family
Author: TheVariableX
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(Added on Sep 22, 2007)
(This month 96847 readers) (Total 139379 readers) |
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In the near future the Chinese have become the last supower and now control most of the world. The iron fisted and discriminatory Chinese Occupation Regime garrison the majority of what was the Free Western Alliance. A minority family of westerners begin an exciting day as the eldest daughter prepares to join her mothers corporation. Pent up emotions and urges are released and things spiral out of control for the family. |
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| Reviewer:
rocket71
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May 22, 2010 |
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Good story. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Sylvana
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Oct 25, 2007 |
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Awesome read and a very funny ending, havent had that much fun reading a story here for months.
Very well written and some nice ideas, too bad it already came to an end.
Keep up the good work and dont let us wait too long for your next story. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
TheVariableX
(Edit) (Oct 25, 2007)
- Thank you very much.
The earliest idea for the story consisted of a mother taking her daughter to work, them undergoing the wonderfully invasive medical procedures, and then the joke ending.
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MIKEY100
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Sep 26, 2007 |
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I really like this story. I like the plot and genre. They few and far between. Please don't keep us waiting for the next chapter. Seems like when ever a good story finally comes along, there is at least a six month wait for another chapter.
This story has a lot of possibility for plot direction. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
TheVariableX
(Edit) (Oct 14, 2007)
- Well it was supposed to be 7 chapters, but I seem to be having difficulty getting the girls to work. It's not my fault they can't keep their hands off each other. Looks like maybe 10 chapters now in this storyline.
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| Reviewer:
Alex50
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Sep 25, 2007 |
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one of the best stories i've red in the last couple of months. I hope the next chapters will be posted soon. (10/10)
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chksng19
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Sep 25, 2007 |
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A pretty good beginning; lots of directions to go. Please post more. (8/10)
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lord_odie
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Sep 24, 2007 |
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Wow, this story is a damn hot one! It's like the author has written this story specifically for me; lots of extreme anal abuse, great word pictures, and my personal favorite: dominant masochists. I wish I could find more stories like this one; and to think I almost passed this one by!
There are a few instances where more editing could be useful, but the creativeness and decadence of the author more than makes up for it. I hope to see many more chapters of this story, and soon!!!
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- Replied by:
TheVariableX
(Edit) (Sep 25, 2007)
- Thanks for the great review.
At the moment I have up to chapter 6 written with a probable conclusion to come in chapter 7. Although I don't rule out returning to the characters at a later date I will probably try a few different stories I have been kicking around first.
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