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The Brothel
Author: sherryjones
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(Added on Sep 22, 2007)
(This month 78686 readers) (Total 103963 readers) |
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Co-ed is kidnapped after winning a wet t-shirt contest. |
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Jan 30, 2009 |
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Excellent account of an evening on the town gone awry, commencing a downward spiral towards despair.
Extremely well written. Reads like an elaborate screenplay for a TV mini-series. A pity it seems not finished yet.
JJ (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
soulcatch
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Sep 30, 2007 |
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Great story, loved your descriptions (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
ramses
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Sep 26, 2007 |
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Well written story. Good development of characters. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
sherryjones
(Edit) (Sep 26, 2007)
- thanks - just posted five more chapters
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| Reviewer:
Sam Blythe
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Sep 25, 2007 |
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Story led me along, enticing me further in. Use of language was good as was the development of primary characters. An excellent beginning and I can't wait for more. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
sherryjones
(Edit) (Sep 26, 2007)
- thanks - i like tens! just posted five more chapters.
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| Reviewer:
preparer29
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Sep 24, 2007 |
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well done; looking forward to further developments. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
sherryjones
(Edit) (Sep 26, 2007)
- thanks - five more chapters are waiting to be posted. hope you enjoy them!
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