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Dark Mind
Author: Black
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(Added on Sep 19, 2007)
(This month 11664 readers) (Total 21166 readers) |
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In a small town a reject plots to kidnap and torture a popular girl that lives next door to him. |
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Average (?):  (5.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
chksng19
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Sep 24, 2007 |
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Lots of concerns. There are these odd things called paragraphs, and sentences. Capital letters in appropriate places and grammar rules followed helps too. The story has potential, but at least give the grammar thing a try, ok? (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Sep 23, 2007 |
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not bad, smaller size fonts would be nice (6/10)
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