|
|
|
|
|
Penny's Ordeal
Author: Excalibur
|
| |
(Added on Sep 19, 2007)
(This month 15275 readers) (Total 37630 readers) |
| |
Penny finds out what happens when she disobeys her Master. |
| Ratings and Reviews: |
| Number
of Ratings: 3 |
 |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
| 1 |
2 |
3 |
4 |
5 |
6 |
7 |
8 |
9 |
10 |
| 0% |
0% |
0% |
0% |
0% |
0% |
33% |
67% |
0% |
0% |
|
Weighed
Average (?):  (7/10) |
Average
Rating:  (8/10) |
| Highest
Rating: (8/10) |
| Lowest
Rating: (7/10) |
|
|
|
|
| Reviewer:
chksng19
(Edit) |
Rating: |
Sep 24, 2007 |
| |
Nicely told to this point; proper handling of an unruly slave. Sounds as though she still needs some breaking; cursing her Master is out of line, aloud or in her head. Anxious to see more, please! (8/10)
|
|
|
|
|
| Reviewer:
mkemse
(Edit) |
Rating: |
Sep 23, 2007 |
| |
interesting start to what looks like will be a real good story (8/10)
|
|
|
|
|
| Reviewer:
Venom
(Edit) |
Rating: |
Sep 23, 2007 |
| |
It is a interesting idea to combinate the themes of your nasty self-bondage stories with a Master & slave tale. But the second half - with the party - is a bit too conventional, and I wouldn't call any part of this story "Extreme". Nevertheless enjoyable. (7/10)
|
|
|
About 