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    | Reviewer: 
    gwen101
  (Edit) | Rating:  | Jan 10, 2008 |   
    |  | Hope the writer continues the story.  And does not move too quickly; relax and tell the story. The emotions and subject matter are good, even though one must suspend belief a bit -- so what.   Details are good, so hope the writer includes more. Codes would help also. (8/10) 
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    slaveneedledick
  (Edit) | Rating:  | Sep 10, 2007 |   
    |  | I must agree about the no codes. It is hard to draw readers if the story is not coded. The storyline is not bad could use some touch up.  (4/10) 
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    hoodedandmasked
  (Edit) | Rating:  | Sep 10, 2007 |   
    |  | Not there yet - but maybe future instalments could become interesting............... (4/10) 
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    mkemse
  (Edit) | Rating:  | Sep 8, 2007 |   
    |  | no codes, no storyline no way to draw a readers the story isn't poorly wriiten the 2 is for no codes and the rest as indicated above (2/10)
 
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