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Amy
Author: Excalibur
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(Added on Aug 10, 2007)
(This month 42005 readers) (Total 70405 readers) |
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self bondage one wrong |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (7/10) |
Average
Rating:  (7.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Curtis
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Aug 19, 2007 |
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This story started so well that I downloaded the first chapter to my personal archives. The rest of the story won't be joining it. A wonderful premise spoiled by poor execution. Once Shiela's part was explained in chapter two, I completely lost my suspension of disbelief. The victim deserved what she got and had to be one of the stupidest women on the face of the earth. (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
bmtphoenix
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Aug 17, 2007 |
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I kind of like how it just WENT without a lot of detail really. Maybe it's a mood, I dunno, but it will be on my bookshelf for later. I think you could probably expand upon this story as well, but I get the feeling you ended it here. (9/10)
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steph2004ster
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Aug 16, 2007 |
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gyrl liked the way the story started, tried but true and a slight twist. she agrees that more dialog would have been better. nevertheless, a good summer's day read! (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Mad Lews
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Aug 12, 2007 |
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A story of exploration turned betrayal. Not a bad concept though it has been done before. It's told to us for the most part; showing us might be better not just the bondage but the reasons. While the opportunity's are lacking from the small cast of characters a bit more dialog would liven it up as well. Reasons and motives all around would be of interest to many readers and help round out the story. (7/10)
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