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Junkshop girl Author: Clever Nick
(Added on Aug 10, 2007) (This month 10087 readers) (Total 20581 readers)
I'm in love with the junkshop girl. But what kind of shop is it really?

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Weighed Average (?): (7.5/10)
Average Rating: (8/10)
Highest Rating: (10/10)
Lowest Rating: (6/10)

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Reviewer: JimmyJump (Edit) Rating: Feb 3, 2009
A vignette, put together with fragments from a foggy reality, together with parts of fading memories of things that might have been.
The riding crop was a nice touch.
JJ (10/10)

Reviewer: sotx66 (Edit) Rating: Mar 19, 2008
well written and interesting. leaves one hanging but that's why we have imaginations isn't it?
(8/10)

Reviewer: bracemaiden (Edit) Rating: Sep 22, 2007
Well-written story, but nothing ACTUALLY happens in this tidbit - it is a daydream in his head about a woman he doesn't know. (7/10)
Replied by: Clevernick (Edit) (Jan 12, 2008)
This is correct. Sure saves me having to add all those tedious story codes... :)

Reviewer: martin.marsen (Edit) Rating: Aug 12, 2007
A very good starter (8/10)

Reviewer: chksng19 (Edit) Rating: Aug 12, 2007
Nope, in this case it is not too short to give a rating. Clever Nick, this is a fine sample of what in the SF field is called a "short-short"; Isaac Asimov wrote one a month for a couple years. They are double-damned hard to write... and you have done so wonderfully. (8/10)
Replied by: Clevernick (Edit) (Aug 13, 2007)
Thanks very much for that, chksng! I am pleased that you liked the way it ended too.
By the way I notice you've kept a lot of the same stories on your bookshelf that I liked. I wonder what you'd think of my other (longer) story on this site.
http://www.bdsmlibrary.com/stories/story.php?storyid=5426

Reviewer: J's blu (Edit) Rating: Aug 11, 2007
i just have to say, well, me too also as well. the writing is great, use of words to paint the picture, put the characters in my head, excellent. but where is the rest of it?
i await eagerly.
respectfully blu (8/10)
Replied by: Clevernick (Edit) (Aug 11, 2007)
Thanks folks for the reviews. I just liked where it ended for now. I hope I'll be able to make the next parts live up to the quality of this one.
Thanks blu and heycarrieanne for the 8/10 on faith and anticipation.
On the other hand, if you want to say it's too short and give a poor rating, I'll agree it's too short. So why not wait for the next bit?

Reviewer: heycarrieanne (Edit) Rating: Aug 11, 2007
A very nice, teasing story. It was well-written and structured well. I enjoyed it. (8/10)

Reviewer: Mad Lews (Edit) Rating: Aug 11, 2007
Gotta go with Willow here, writing is up to snuff, you just don't seem to have posted much of it at all. Did the download get cut short?
I'll give it a real review when the story is moving along. (Honest) (7/10)

Reviewer: willow (Edit) Rating: Aug 10, 2007
well for what you have it is great ...there is not enough though .. you're writing is descriptive and i can really see into his head ...just expand upon what is there (6/10)

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