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Chloe's New Life
Author: Arnold Puttywn
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(Added on Aug 5, 2007)
(This month 36812 readers) (Total 72007 readers) |
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In part 1 Chloe Dawson was kidnapped by Ms. Van Allen, her boss and sold, to the ultra wealthy Mme. Ruluc from Haiti. |
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Oct 7, 2010 |
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Well written, alas with little attention paid to the character development.
Good conversations and some enticing content save "Chloe's New Life" from certain disaster, because the road that leads to the 'new life' is as novel as the invention of hot water.
JJ (7/10)
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johnlw77
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May 21, 2010 |
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A promising start but Chloe's inner feelings and her descent into helplessness need describing more fully. (9/10)
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bmtphoenix
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Sep 12, 2007 |
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I like it a lot so far...can't wait for chapter 3! (10/10)
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Mad Lews
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Aug 8, 2007 |
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Well written, easy to follow, great detail and a plot. What more can we ask for? Oh yeah, More chapters please! (9/10)
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Pussycat Sam
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Aug 7, 2007 |
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Great start!
Your writing skills are very accomplished which makes it nice and easy to read, so thanks for that.
I was a little puzzled about the relationships between some of the dominant women though. They seemed to be fighting between themselves but I couldn't tell why. No doubt things will clarify as the story progresses. I often have stuff in my work that isn't clear at first, so I shall reserve judgment til there's a bit more to it.
One other point, I could have done with a bit more detail about how Chloe is feeling while all this is happening to her. Clearly she's pretty naive and very keen to please but why? She must be very confused about what's going on but I didn't get that strongly enough from her.
Thanks and keep it coming!
Love Sam.
xxx (7/10)
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chksng19
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Aug 6, 2007 |
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A promising beginning! Hoping there is more (8/10)
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