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O's Magic
Author: odalisque
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(Added on Aug 5, 2007)
(This month 52197 readers) (Total 62798 readers) |
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o is taken on a vacation to a magic theatre and more |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Dryhill
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Mar 14, 2010 |
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I agree the W/we style is a bit off putting at first but after a while I got used to it. Still a good bit of writing. (9/10)
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Clevernick
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Aug 8, 2007 |
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Personally I found the shifting back and forth between "i" and "slave" distracting, as well as the split "W/we", but I expect that's really how you write and talk, so who am I to criticize?
Okay, other comments, but I'm still giving it a ten.
As a diary form it is simply wonderful. But as a story, there is no plot. No character develops, no adversary is faced, no triumph or defeat is experienced, there is no climax or denouement.
As a stroke story, there's no sex scene to stroke in.
I loved it anyway. None of this took away from the beauty of the story.
I hope every word is true. (10/10)
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