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Sylvie
Author: Excalibur
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(Added on Aug 3, 2007)
(This month 51939 readers) (Total 60521 readers) |
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sylvies night out in bondage |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (7/10) |
Average
Rating:  (7.5/10) |
Highest
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| Reviewer:
bracemaiden
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Sep 22, 2007 |
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I have to agree with chksng19 - excellent story, but you need to use the describer tags to get the readers you want. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
bmtphoenix
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Aug 17, 2007 |
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Eh, this one kind of sucked. (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
bolondro4
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Aug 7, 2007 |
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perhaps a 2nd part interacting with the motorist will be more interesting. In fact, i was waiting for it when the story ends. Using tags improve it also. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
chksng19
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Aug 4, 2007 |
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Excellent. A fine story with some interesting twists, and the door open to sequels.
My only critique is that you need to use the describers for the story! You'll lose readers unless you do. (9/10)
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