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Fitness Freak Ordeal
Author: Harry Berg
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(Added on Jul 31, 2007)
(This month 111407 readers) (Total 166668 readers) |
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Marlene “Marnie” Wagner wakes to find herself being raped by four strange men who’ve kidnapped her. Her initial assumption that it was random proves wrong when the mysterious Sergei arrives to torture her into revealing the location of a missing twenty million dollars. The recent death of her husband in a boating accident may be faked. Sergei offers her a deal. Find the money or be killed along with her family. Marnie begins an odyssey to discover what really happened. |
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Jan 3, 2008 |
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not bad at all, real good start it reads like a novel even if no where near as long (9/10)
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TomOfSweden
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Nov 29, 2007 |
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The sex scenes are extremely well written. I like how she's thinking of other stuff while being raped. What I didn't like was the other stuff. You don't explore her emotions that much which is okay if she's supposed to be a superhuman fuck slut, which is fine in stories. But if you're not going for believable, why put so much effort in making the story believable. I thought it was a bit wasted effort and detracted from the story. Anyway, I gave it a good score since it gave me a hard on, which is what counts. I think the first two where the best ones. After that it's a bit too little rape and too much "boring stuff".
It may sound like I'm being mean and don't like it. I'm not. I think it was great. (9/10)
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Venom
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Oct 3, 2007 |
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Wonderfully weird;
better and better with every part - at least till now ;)
After this fifth part I guess: the husband is stil alive and happy with his twenty millions and his secret girlfriend while his "widow" gets her arse toasted. (8/10)
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chksng19
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Sep 8, 2007 |
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An interesting place for a chapter break. Hmm...
Not a bad telling of the tale; I hope things pick up somewhat in the next segment. AND they did. Well done! (9/10)
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