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Eighth Concubine
Author: littletiar
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(Added on Jul 21, 2007)
(This month 48468 readers) (Total 54714 readers) |
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Her father died and her step-mother sold her to the nearest rich man she can get her hands on. This is her story of trials endured at the new household; competing with the previously existent wife and concubines. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (5.5/10) |
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Highest
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Jan 6, 2009 |
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ok as a whole enjoyable to read (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
masterdw
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Jul 24, 2007 |
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I don't like giving low ratings, but look at the last word of the story. I think it should be dispare. Instead it is disapear. in addition nothing happened in the story and there is no hint of where it is going. (4/10)
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| Reviewer:
Mad Lews
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Jul 21, 2007 |
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Some what inscrutable for me. The story lacks passion and emotional depth. Perhaps that's a deliberate cultural comment but if so it needs to be presented in an engaging way so your readers care about what happens to the main character. (6/10)
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