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A Sister's Blackmail
Author: Iggy
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(Added on Jul 21, 2007)
(This month 88675 readers) (Total 158265 readers) |
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Sarah's younger sister takes some pictures of her in a compromising position and compels her to do some embarrassing things. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (8/10) |
Average
Rating:  (8.5/10) |
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Borborad
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Aug 23, 2012 |
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good one (9/10)
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Martiniman
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Jan 15, 2012 |
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Very good story. I loved the idea of the locks as nipple piercings. To bad this story was never continued! (9/10)
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subKatie69
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Jan 14, 2009 |
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loving it so far but as some have said there was more story just between the sisters but you could have the mum put the sister in control of her to keep it going do hope you finish it has great potential to be one of the long stories on here that are great (9/10)
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quixote327
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Nov 16, 2008 |
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Denial was great. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
wagonaka
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Sep 26, 2008 |
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Very nice story indeed! The tease and denial are super. Please go on! (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Curtis
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Sep 16, 2008 |
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Lakewood is right that this story developed too quickly, but I DON'T CARE!!! I may be sorry for the '10' later, but right now this story is hot, hot, hot. Major jerkoff material.
Edit: After part two added, I'M NOT SORRY!!! This story is great with a capital 'eat'. The only thing wrong with it was the fourteen month wait between installments. (hint) (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
himind
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Dec 25, 2007 |
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Sad to see this story not being developed.It had real potential.. (8/10)
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mkemse
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Jul 31, 2007 |
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this is very similar to alot of high school blackmail stories, good but getting thin on the subject, only so many ways to make a hamburger (7/10)
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atomicgeek77
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Jul 25, 2007 |
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I thought that this was a wonderfully creative story with a wonderful twists. Hoping to read more (8/10)
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SensoryOverlord
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Jul 24, 2007 |
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Nice idea - the younger sister in control. But you're throwing away a lot of potential here. What happened to the 'horny pills'? That alone should have done for a lengthy scene. I'll add to the general cry of "too fast, too fast!" (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Kev
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Jul 24, 2007 |
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I really liked the start but felt that it moved too fast forward. I would go slower as many others have suggested. I would love it the sister didnt do so many permantent changes but more subtle ones like with the bra and the thin shirt.
Keep up the good work (7/10)
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RhondaLee
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Jul 24, 2007 |
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A creative beginning with new idea that I haven't read before. Keep up the good work (9/10)
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kring1000
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Jul 23, 2007 |
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Interesting story, was fun to read! Please continue. (9/10)
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kamf1978
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Jul 22, 2007 |
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Looking forward to see what goes on next. Like the others have said I hope it slows down a little, and doesn't become too heavy too early. (9/10)
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patriziapanther
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Jul 22, 2007 |
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I liked the setup and the plot, although I have to agree, that the story's moving awfully fast.
But please continue (9/10)
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azrlg17
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Jul 22, 2007 |
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Too implausible. Yeah so she masturbates. Who do you think a normal mother would punish more? A kid who masturbates or her sister who is a peeping tom, takes pictures of it and tries to blackmail her with publishing pics of her sister (the mothers daughter) on the net? Hmmmm?
And the first day nc nipple piercings?
Sorry that just doesn't work.
No sex yet.
Good grammar and spelling.
(4/10)
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| Reviewer:
ElectricBadger
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Jul 22, 2007 |
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Good writing and inventive situations, I like the concept. As mentioned, it moves a bit fast and that may make it really hard to continue for too long, but still a lot to go with. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
C_Lakewood
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Jul 21, 2007 |
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A very promising beginning. The rating might
improve, based on what comes next. NC nipple
piercing in the first chapter makes me cautious,
however. Be careful of giving too much, too
soon. The study hall scene might also have
been a bit premature. (Perhaps a private
humiliation session should really have
preceded it.)
It's well-written, though it should have had a
human proof-reader (who might have noticed that
you meant "sheer" but wrote "shear") in addition
to the spell-check.
I'll be looking forward to the continuation. (7/10)
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