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Julie's Anniversary
Author: Unknown
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(Added on Nov 11, 2001)
(This month 53283 readers) (Total 89812 readers) |
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To celebrate Julie's anniversary of her mistress's slave, she was taken to a special place for special training. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (7/10) |
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| Reviewer:
pharma
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Jun 2, 2016 |
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Thanks, that is a good story, there are not so much extreme tortures, but the story itself is really hot, the girls are really slutty and perverted. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
MsEvelynnH
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Mar 17, 2005 |
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I just recently found this story up to chapter 6. I'd like to see what happens next *WG* (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
brant223
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Feb 11, 2002 |
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Weak. All about breast torture. Ugh! (4/10)
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| Reviewer:
toter
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Nov 17, 2001 |
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outstanding keep up the good work. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
kaleun76
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Nov 16, 2001 |
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It is a pity it does not have an ending
(9/10)
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| Reviewer:
soliscjw
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Nov 15, 2001 |
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this was a good storie one of the best I have read I look forward to updates (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
ownedgirl
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Nov 13, 2001 |
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Except for one additional rating point, I can only parrot what hyphen 666 has stated (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
hyphen666
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Nov 12, 2001 |
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I have read worse, much worse. This story is not very original, but that can be said about 95 percent of everything that has ever been written.
The slave seems to be getting a very good workout, and let's face it, that's why most of us read this stuff. As for more ideas, that will be tough to do since the author cannot be reached. (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
Jonathan
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Nov 11, 2001 |
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"*****COMMENTS ARE NEEDED. I HAVEN'T THOUGHT OF ANY CHAPTERS PAST
THE BARN. "
My comment: Don't bother. I don't believe the author can claim to have
"thought of" any of this story. A slave is taken in for training and all the standard
stuff happens. No surprises, no tension, and no breasts small than a 'D'. This
story wasn't written, it was regurgitated. It's not even a story. It's a story fragment.
It isn't, and probably won't ever be, finished (not an entirely bad thing). Why do
unfinished stories get posted? Does this annoy anyone besides me? (1/10)
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- Replied by:
hyphen666
(Edit) (Nov 12, 2001)
- I share your annoyance to a degree, but I don't have a problem with this particular entry with respect to completeness. The ones that drive me crazy are those 10 to 20 kB inputs that aren't even long enough to establish whatever passes for a plot or character development.
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