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My Soul
Author: PerryDM
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(Added on Jul 17, 2007)
(This month 9774 readers) (Total 15887 readers) |
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A true account of dating a woman that I am totally and completely devoted to. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (6/10) |
Average
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Highest
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| Reviewer:
Curtis
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Jul 20, 2007 |
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Only an 8 for people who like their S&M hard. Most of the complaints of the other reviewers are valid, but this is good stroke material, if no good fiction. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Snark
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Jul 19, 2007 |
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Interesting story line and imaginative disciplines. Personalizing with names, developing the characters through emotional envolvement would help to involve the reader. While the descriptions are good, without the emotional and character development it becomes a reporting of a series of events. Spell check and grammer check are also recommended. Keep at it! I look forward to your next one. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
DeGrinch
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Jul 18, 2007 |
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Perhaps there was a first part I didn't see, but I felt the chacters needed more developement. The writting itself was good making the piece easy to read. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Jul 18, 2007 |
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the story was ok but missed inport aspects of it, (5/10)
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cum girl
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Jul 17, 2007 |
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Where was the devotion? Where was the emotion? Everything came across as totally unfeeling. Just a prose list of 'I did this and then I did that'. Difficult to follow at times. (4/10)
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