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Persephone in Winter
Author: Night Writer
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(Added on Jul 12, 2007)
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A marriage shaken by routine and miscommunication sends Elyse on an odyssey of submission with a mysterious stranger. |
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Average (?):  (9.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Misschief
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Dec 20, 2008 |
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Well written prose and quite arousing content.. I am going to look for more of your stuff, Night Writer.. (9/10)
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jep33
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Aug 2, 2007 |
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Well, this is amazing writing. I am envious. The writer shows an amazing patience to develop a story properly rather than going for the kill immediately. This is the best story of its kind that I have read. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
Night Writer
(Edit) (Aug 3, 2007)
- Thanks, jep33. Often it takes just as much patience to read as it did to write - that you recognized that and chose to stay with it to the end is praise enough. The time you took to both read and review is very much appreciated.
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JimmyJump
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Jul 30, 2007 |
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Altough I like this story less than the newly arrived 'True Love', this one's far better written, if that is possible.
That I like 'True Love' more says absolutely nothing about the author's abilities but more about what makes me tick...
'Persephone In Winter' is an instant classic. By style, by storytelling, by ingenuity... and by the sheer characterisation of the pro/antagonists.
This little gem should be sitting in print on our shelf and proudly so...
A True Writer has arisen.
Again, Mr. Night Writer, you have my thanks for sharing your imagination with us. And my admiration, because I admire good writers. Simple as that...
JJ (10/10)
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- Replied by:
Night Writer
(Edit) (Aug 1, 2007)
- Thanks, JJ. I know this one begs a bit more suspension of disbelief than some are prepared to give, so I'm especially appreciative (and surprised) when those same readers stay with the story to the end. I'm very, very flattered by your kind words, and it's my pleasure to share my sometimes warped imagination with those who find enjoyment in it.
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mkemse
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Jul 30, 2007 |
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this is what writing is all about (10/10)
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Night Writer
(Edit) (Aug 1, 2007)
- Thanks mkemse. Once again, your praise is much appreciated.
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H Dean
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Jul 20, 2007 |
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Compelling and high quality are the first words that come to mind. That this story has not gotten more attention is a travesty. I wish I could write like this. The few minor technical issues were outshone by the author's style and story telling. Really, this is some top notch writing. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
Night Writer
(Edit) (Jul 20, 2007)
- Well, what do I say to that? I haven't had time to explore much here, but your work was highly recommended, the first I read, and speaks to me in a very personal way. The Dinner Party is the first story of its kind in a long, long time that has piqued my imagination with its originality and clever sophistication so often missing in our world of amateur storytelling. Your comments are especially appreciated. That I'm flattered doesn't come close to saying enough. Thank you, thank you, thank you.
-NW
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H Dean
(Edit) (Jul 21, 2007)
- Tell you what - you lead my marching and shouter society and I will lead yours.
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Night Writer
(Edit) (Jul 22, 2007)
- OK, but I'll warn you in advance - leading my marching and shouter society is much like being the Maytag man - it can get verry lonely...
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H Dean
(Edit) (Jul 24, 2007)
- They just don't know you yet.
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innocentsub
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Jul 16, 2007 |
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this has to be one of the most creative stories i've read for a long time..it kept me spell bound and riveted to what would happen next..you have a way of placing the reader right there within the plot line..i felt sorry for Steven yet not...what she did is what every red blooded wife would long to do...myself included...fantastic story..i look forward to more... (10/10)
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- Replied by:
Night Writer
(Edit) (Jul 17, 2007)
- Thanks, innocentsub. Hearing that I've taken you into the lives of the characters is the ultimate compliment. My intent was to refrain from placing blame solely on Steven or Elyse. Neither was completely innocent or guilty, much like most real-life relationships. Why is it so hard for so many to let an intimate partner know what they really need? Why is it so easy to neglect the one you love? <shrug>
-NW
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Snark
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Jul 15, 2007 |
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EXQUISITE!!! Delicious details, outstanding descriptions. Efficient, almost sparse style in places with a tension that is palpable. While accepting cuckoldry enrages me, this story absorbed me as few others. BRAVO! (10/10)
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Night Writer
(Edit) (Jul 15, 2007)
- Very kind and generous words, Snark. My sincere thanks. I know certain elements are disturbing to some, and I'm very grateful you chose to stay with the story to the end. I have to say I've received a very warm welcome here, and I appreciate that so much. Thanks to you and all others who have braved from first to last chapters a story that for some, can be a difficult read.
-NW
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suetc
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Jul 13, 2007 |
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Excellent story had to read it from start to finish till the wee hours this morning. A story i wish my husband would read thats for sure. (10/10)
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Night Writer
(Edit) (Jul 15, 2007)
- Thanks, suetc. Sorry I kept you up late, but I'm no stranger to the wee hours myself. "Part vampire?" asked a lady friend recently. As to your husband, I better not go there... ;)
-NW
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chksng19
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Jul 12, 2007 |
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An outstanding tale, written with skill and, I think, knowledge. A walk into the soul of a distressed husband... and a distressed spouse. Intelligent and believable. Good job! (10/10)
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Night Writer
(Edit) (Jul 15, 2007)
- Valued praise from you, chksng19. Checking your review list, you're an avid reader here, so a "10" from you is high praise indeed.
All my characters are distressed - it's no fun seeing them get too comfortable, although some get far from the happy ending in this one.
Thanks again,
-NW
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RiverOtter
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Jul 12, 2007 |
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I wish I could write this well. I think you have a good "economy of style"--you don't need to use a lot of excess verbiage to write great desrciptions. It was a little melodramatic but most erotica is anyway. I enjoyed it. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
Night Writer
(Edit) (Jul 15, 2007)
- You're right, RiverOtter - finding the right word is everything, but all too often I think I don't get it right, and compromise. It's tough sometimes, and then other days the words just pour onto the page. Wish I knew why.
I do tend to wax melodramatic - just my temptation to go a little goth now and then. But it's what I see and hear in my head, so it's become part of my style. At least I'm not channeling Anne Rice - not yet, anyway!
Thanks for your review, RiverOtter.
-NW
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TOXIS
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Jul 12, 2007 |
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Great story from the author of Surrending Sarah. Very well told. A very hot ending. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
Night Writer
(Edit) (Jul 15, 2007)
- High praise from you as well, old friend. Especially glad you liked the ending. I'll be in touch...
-NW
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