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Jesse's Birthday
Author: Captured
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(Added on Nov 6, 2001)
(This month 25511 readers) (Total 56475 readers) |
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He made himself bound and gagged and be a birthday gift for his girlfriend. But someone changed the rules and made him a total submissive. |
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Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
jls152
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May 12, 2011 |
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The story needs a follow up where Bill gets back at Lauren for the mean trick she pulled on Bill and all his suffering. Otherwise, this ending seems rather weak and doesn't fit the story. It was nice reading, though. Thanks. It would be nice if readers could tip or make donations to writers whose story has been enjoyed. I would gladly leave a tip. -fielder17j@yahoo.com (8/10)
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xSoCalCynicx
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Jan 22, 2011 |
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Perhaps this story has a nice premise on some level, but, this story is a case study of how not to conduct a scene according to Safe, Sane, and Consentual. I will not list every mistake, but a few are: 1. The girlfriend drinking before treating her boyfriend 2. The boyfriend allowing someone inexperienced to position and tie him 3. The girlfriend leaving the boyfriend strung up while she sleeps for 12 hours.
Pile everything up, and we as readers are supposed to believe a happy ending is possible? Fantasy story or no, there is no way such an ending is plausible.
To be fair the writer does have talent for storytelling. (5/10)
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bullfinch
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Feb 20, 2009 |
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a well written extreme love story. (10/10)
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bracemaiden
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Feb 14, 2004 |
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“An extreme love story”? Battering a gagged lover into unconsiousness, then leaving him goes beyond unsafe. Then add drugs to the mix. Then a handcuff-style lock around the penis, and add weight. Almost everything in there was way, WAY too unsafe for me.
Hate to rain on the parade of 9's and 10's, but "Toture" was NOT in the story codes. If it was, I wouldn't have read it... (4/10)
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robert216
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Dec 13, 2002 |
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Well written, nice plot development (9/10)
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errol42
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Jan 9, 2002 |
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Absolutely superb bondage and extended torture scene (10/10)
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BMaster
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Dec 1, 2001 |
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This is just a hit and a must, for alle bondagelovers. A very fine story! (10/10)
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