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The Superior Race
Author: Lee~
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(Added on Jul 10, 2007)
(This month 10604 readers) (Total 25264 readers) |
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The year was 2047, and the world had been over taken by a dominated race from another planet. hey are a superior human race with an intellect that far out way our own. They have come to experiment; play; toture and turn us into their slaves, and slowly eradicating our species. We will become obsolete. |
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Dec 27, 2008 |
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nothing here (1/10)
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| Reviewer:
chksng19
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Jul 14, 2007 |
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Oh, please. Was this written for a wanking story? There were so many errors, even in the teaser introduction, that I should have been warned enough. For instance, it is not 'out way', it is outweigh. Penises do not HAVE a uterus; a uterus is the womb where babies are carried before birth. Penises have urethras. This is the tube through the penis back to the fluid producing organs.
A LOT of editing could make this a wanking story for 15 year olds. It does not belong in this library.
7/14 Story was updated today; penises still have wombs. Little better anywhere else. (1/10)
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| Reviewer:
slaveneedledick
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Jul 14, 2007 |
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The others hit the review right on. I was not at all impressed. (1/10)
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| Reviewer:
Guiller
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Jul 11, 2007 |
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Well, nothing more to add :(
Try again mate, theidea is good, but needs better work (1/10)
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| Reviewer:
H Dean
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Jul 10, 2007 |
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Unfortunately, though this author tried, I can find nothing to recommend this story. I can't even find anything constructive to offer except that this author should stick to his native tongue. English is clearly not this author's forte. (1/10)
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