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Sally's first time
Author: Excalibur
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(Added on Jul 7, 2007)
(This month 10822 readers) (Total 18950 readers) |
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Sally had been trying self bondage for a while, today she was going for total immobilisation |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
dontmindme
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Aug 24, 2012 |
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Very well written, but far too short. (8/10)
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JimmyJump
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Oct 7, 2010 |
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Interesting little essay. Nicely done with a good ending as well.
On the other hand, I found "Sally's First Time" to be too short to be really enjoyable. And besides the self-bondage, nothing really happens.
As a result, the story comes across as a bit pedestrian instead of growing in intensity.
Solid writing though.
JJ (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Jan 23, 2009 |
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good job hope therei s more to cum (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Mist
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Apr 23, 2008 |
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nice story any more chapters? (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
OrgasmSlut
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Sep 1, 2007 |
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Makes you want to read more. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
bracemaiden
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Jul 10, 2007 |
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The writing was decent, the position commendable. More would have been better.
(8/10)
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