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Alice's Toy Room
Author: Alice Parker
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(Added on Jul 7, 2007)
(This month 11954 readers) (Total 29960 readers) |
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Alice sees Frank in a whole new light. |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Oct 7, 2010 |
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heycarrieanne asks for more background detail. While it wouldn't harm the story, I on the other hand feel that those aren't needed, as there's enough depth to the characters and richness in the conversations/musings of Alice to make the story stand tall as it is.
Add to the aformentioned some excellent writing and we've got us a neat little story.
Well done, Alice Parker.
JJ (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Abe Froman
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Oct 22, 2007 |
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The more I read this collection of stories -- and I do think each one contributes to the others -- I find myself more and more drawn into their world. There is a harshness but also a palpable reality to their interactions. Well done -- whenever I finish one story, I want to read the next with a greater urgency. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Alice Parker
(Edit) (Oct 24, 2007)
- Bravo Mr. Froman! I always knew the hip kids would figure it out. Thank you very much and I am only too glad to be able to entertain you, if only for a short time.
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ljd
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Jul 14, 2007 |
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This story was great enjoyed reading it from start to finish (so far i hope). I could really believe the senario. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Alice Parker
(Edit) (Jul 19, 2007)
- Thank you sugar! I am glad you enjoyed it!
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| Reviewer:
Shakespeare_I._Aint
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Jul 11, 2007 |
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This story hit a home run. Very hot and interesting and one of the best I've seen around here in a few months. Great job! (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Alice Parker
(Edit) (Jul 12, 2007)
- Who says you ain't a Shakespeare? I think your review exhibits excellent writing skills!
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| Reviewer:
sunnykub
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Jul 10, 2007 |
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Look forward to reading more of the story! (8/10)
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- Replied by:
Alice Parker
(Edit) (Jul 12, 2007)
- Thank you! I will try not to make you wait too long, but I do have a tiny sadistic streak...
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| Reviewer:
Curtis
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Jul 9, 2007 |
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Background? We don't need no stinking background! This story is the background for a forthcoming party story. It's jerkoff material, and it's good. No 'slow' codes needed with this one. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
Alice Parker
(Edit) (Jul 12, 2007)
- Mmmmmmm. I'm just sorry I couldn't do more to help!
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| Reviewer:
Tcheena3
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Jul 9, 2007 |
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Phew! Seriously hot story. Wet! Nicely developed with lots of little pointers to the action to come which help raise the anticipation (and temperature!). How soon do we get to hear about the party? (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Alice Parker
(Edit) (Jul 12, 2007)
- Thank you very much! In regard to your question: you will get it, but you'll have to wait until it pleases me to give it to you.
Just keep checking. I can say I have a few stories that are about ready to post but the party is not one of them.
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| Reviewer:
heycarrieanne
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Jul 7, 2007 |
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This was a good story, but I think some background information would have been nice. (7/10)
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- Replied by:
Alice Parker
(Edit) (Jul 12, 2007)
- heycarrieanne-
Since you reviewed the first story I posted, I can only guess this is a clever ploy on your part to get a spanking.
- Replied by:
heycarrieanne
(Edit) (Jul 12, 2007)
- {{giggles nervously and backs away from the author}}
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