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Valentine's Day
Author: BZ
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(Added on Jul 4, 2007)
(This month 50498 readers) (Total 58206 readers) |
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A neglectful wife receives a much needed attitude adjustment. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (3/10) |
Average
Rating:  (2.5/10) |
Highest
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
(Edit) |
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Jan 20, 2009 |
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I managed to struggle through this tale, but am afraid BZ wrote this after a night on the town.
Way too superfluous with cardboard characters.
JJ (4/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Jul 20, 2008 |
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the longest sentence ever, you need to paragraph it and check puncuation at the minimum (2/10)
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- Replied by:
BZ2
(Edit) (Jul 27, 2008)
- I understand what you mean. The story somehow got mangled in transmission. If you would like to give the story another try with the correct punctuation, e-mail me at bcsollte2@comcast.net and I will send a copy of the story as it should have appeared.
Thanks for your interest in the story,
BZ
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| Reviewer:
Avralivia
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Jul 6, 2007 |
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wasnt that badly written, just no paragraphs..... i recommend using word going through it and sorting it out, overall a passable story but not particularly good im afraid. Don't lose heart try again :) im sure you could do lots better! (3/10)
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| Reviewer:
Guiller
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Jul 5, 2007 |
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Impossible to read, no puntuation or separations (1/10)
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