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My pig
Author: Memento
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(Added on Jul 2, 2007)
(This month 95674 readers) (Total 139938 readers) |
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Another one from my stables, or in this case, my sty |
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Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
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Rating: (7.5/10) |
Highest
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Oct 7, 2010 |
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Another letdown this is. Memento fails to stir-up some heat, thanks to the awkward lay-out and follow-up of the different letters/e-mails.
The writing style of both the pig and the owner is too polite, not intimate enough despite the content of the correspondence.
JJ (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
H Dean
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Jul 13, 2007 |
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I was a bit torn on the rating number to give to this story. For what it was supposed to be it was effective. Certain stylizings annoyed me and I would have liked the story to be delivered in a little more of a formal manner. Maybe it's my own failures that brings me to rate this as a "7" and not better. To close, I should say that it was a good read and should provide a good thrill for people looking for a good yanker. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
WyldWyl
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Jul 13, 2007 |
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Another well-written outing with some interesting ideas. Hope you'll continue it, or just to see more work from you soon. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Abe Froman
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Jul 4, 2007 |
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The story was good, and certainly showed a progression of her use and enthusiasm, but I would have liked to see a bit more variety in the way they interacted. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
heycarrieanne
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Jul 3, 2007 |
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Yikes!!! This story certainly held my attention. It was well written and easy to differentiate between the two people talking. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
pollycoventry
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Jul 3, 2007 |
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GREAT
HOPE YOU CONTINUE WITH HER ABUSE FAR STRONGER (9/10)
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