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Author: Aceith
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(Added on Jun 17, 2007)
(This month 55741 readers) (Total 71357 readers) |
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Certain women are offered the choice of doing three months imprisonment in a special facility producing disgusting porn movies, or entering the national prison system, doing the full sentence, where their life and health are in serious danger. None refuse the special offer, since they realize what the alternative means. |
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| Reviewer:
ElectricBadger
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Jun 18, 2007 |
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A good concept for a story, with a great setting and finishes with a nice scene, but it needs to be executed: the first 2/3 seem to be an outline/explanation, not a story, and the last couple bits are very confusing. A great start, but I suggest a bit of reworking and re-post this! (5/10)
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