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Asian sexslave farm
Author: suzuki
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(Added on Jun 17, 2007)
(This month 27495 readers) (Total 62568 readers) |
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(based on a true story) During World War II, after the japs were defeated, many asian sexslaves that were formerly used by the japs were freed, but instead of returning to their countries, they were re-captured and tortured, sbused, used by the Allies soldiers. Many of them were stored on farms that were collectively know as the asian farms that were used as a interacial breeding ground. |
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Average (?):  (2/10) |
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Jun 27, 2010 |
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Suzuki seems to have vanished across the horizon on his speeding name (I prefer Honda or Yamaha myself). Besides presenting us with the shortest chapter in the history of short stories, the grammar is as thin as a tin-foil hat's brim.
Looking at the author's e-mail, I know another author uses the same one (which makes that other author the same one as this one, capish?)
Suzuki's statement that his father was half white Australian has me wondering which half...
Introduction shows promise. But so did Hitler when at school...
JJ (3/10)
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Gordi
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Jan 28, 2008 |
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How is this even posted? Too bad you can't vote zero stars... (1/10)
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robyn
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Aug 8, 2007 |
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evry poor (2/10)
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mkemse
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Jun 25, 2007 |
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nothing there (1/10)
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Skruddgemire
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Jun 24, 2007 |
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Content...
...As in "Lack Thereof"
It's annoying when someone codes a story submission and only gives you the first chapter where nothing or damn little interesting happens and you're waiting for the next part of the story, but two paragraphs? And poorly spelled and grammar checked is insulting. Wait until you have actual content before you post next time. (1/10)
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H Dean
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Jun 22, 2007 |
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Simply put, I am offended and insulted as a writer and a reader. (1/10)
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kemosabe
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Jun 21, 2007 |
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My only surprise is that some of you gave this a 2 or a 3 (1/10)
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Lensman
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Jun 20, 2007 |
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Shortest story without anything concerning the topic of this page! (1/10)
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castle2001
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Jun 19, 2007 |
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From the grammar used, choice of words, and the story line I believe our site is being tapped into by anti western propagandists. I anticipate a slew of tales taken from the protocols of Zion.
This is not BDSM, not porn, it's truly terror. It am not calling for censorship. However, I am calling for awareness of the world in which we live and how far sectarian terrorists will go. (1/10)
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chksng19
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Jun 19, 2007 |
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Absolutely an idea that deserves continuation. OK, you have got us interested: now how about some story, rather than just a tease? (3/10)
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ElectricBadger
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Jun 18, 2007 |
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No story here, just an intro...I'd like to see more, but I suggest you finish a few pages before posting. (2/10)
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bthest
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Jun 17, 2007 |
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Its very poor form to start a story with a chapter that is slightly longer than the synopsis. Grammar is also poor. Example: Its spelled A-u-s-t-r-a-l-i-a-n. Also, in my opinion, the term "Japs" should not be used in the narration unless its part of a character's dialogue. And shouldn't it be "the terror continues" and not the "terror begins"? (2/10)
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- Replied by:
castle2001
(Edit) (Jun 19, 2007)
- Ditto. Not even a spell checker was used. I hope to be proven wrong but I suspect a middle eastern source. The terrorists continue.
- Replied by:
castle2001
(Edit) (Jun 19, 2007)
- Ditto. Not even a spell checker was used. I hope to be proven wrong but I suspect a middle eastern source. The terrorists continue.
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