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The Birthday Gift
Author: Polecat
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(Added on Jun 12, 2007)
(This month 55514 readers) (Total 70940 readers) |
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A girl gets help finding a suitable gift for her husband\'s birthday. |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
Elkor
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Jun 18, 2007 |
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Favortie story-line of mine, and well executed in the beginning. I would have liked to see more detail at the end, it feels like it ended rather quickly.
A romantic sequel would be a great idea. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
KSCouple4SLV
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Jun 16, 2007 |
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Loved the start of this story. Nicely written. Hope you will continue with it so we can read about what else happens between the three of them. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Polecat
(Edit) (Jun 16, 2007)
- Thank you. I hadn't thought of writing a sequel, but, Who knows?
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| Reviewer:
Snark
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Jun 13, 2007 |
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Nicely done! (I wouldn't have expected anything less.) Well presented and detailed, good progression and finale. As for the tense changes mentioned by a prior reveiwer, I disagree. Tense changes to the present when describing the present, back to past when describing a memory. A bit short and mild for the Polecat, but still an enjoyable tale quite worthy of reading. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Polecat
(Edit) (Jun 14, 2007)
- Thank you for your comments.
The story was originally written for a magazine that required it to be in past tense. In the end, I did not like to do it in past tense, so I posted it here.
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Soryaan
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Jun 13, 2007 |
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I loved it (10/10)
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chksng19
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Jun 13, 2007 |
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Nice and romantic, a wonderful gift. Wish someone would give ME that one! (9/10)
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ElectricBadger
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Jun 13, 2007 |
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Really well written, good story and details! (9/10)
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heycarrieanne
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Jun 12, 2007 |
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It you didn't keep switching tenses from past to present, I would have given this a 10 for sure! It was a great story! (8/10)
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