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Saturday's Errands
Author: slavegirl
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(Added on Jun 9, 2007)
(This month 53124 readers) (Total 67260 readers) |
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A day in the life of a young D/s couple. |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Oct 6, 2010 |
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Bar a few oddities and errors (leather stinging the skin when slapped on the hood covering jan's face, or being pulled 'taught' when taut is meant), this is good. A satisfying read, because of being well written; in an almost dreamlike style.
Personally, what I liked best about "Saturday's errands" is the cute eagerness of Jan to obey. Maybe not an in-born masochist, but her willingness is endearing. The handling of Jan as an object, without losing eye for her personality is also very well done here.
Very nice. A continuation would be even nicer.
JJ (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Dryhill
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Apr 14, 2010 |
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A good first story with plenty of pace. Perhaps just a tad slower and include a little more characterization might have earnt you a higher rating.
When are we going to see what Master has planned for the folloing week? (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
hoodedandmasked
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Jun 12, 2007 |
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Thank you. Very enjoyable - I hope there may be a sequel............ (9/10)
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- Replied by:
bobanddianne
(Edit) (Jun 15, 2007)
- Thanks for your positive review to my first online story. We are working on other stories that are a bit different but in terms of a sequel I would like to know what you liked best about Saturday's Errands.
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| Reviewer:
ElectricBadger
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Jun 10, 2007 |
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Great work, I hope to see more! (8/10)
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- Replied by:
bobanddianne
(Edit) (Jun 15, 2007)
- Thanks for your positive response to my first online story. We are working on other stories with different themes.
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