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Dairy
Author: Memento
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(Added on Jun 9, 2007)
(This month 75422 readers) (Total 113210 readers) |
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A woman's life on a special farm |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
Martiniman
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Dec 17, 2011 |
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Very interesting story. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Oct 6, 2010 |
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Very nice little story, or at least, the beginning of what could become a nice story.
Too short to be a knock-out, "Dairy" has great descriptions and --for Memento's doing-- less errors than usual.
Could become quite 'better' if material was added.
Seven points from myself for the story, plus one from my buttons for the content.
JJ (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Dryhill
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May 4, 2010 |
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Perhaps a little more time could have been spent at the beginning to help establish the characters, however it is still a good read.
Thank you for an interesting and desirable story. (9/10)
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millymooe
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Dec 18, 2008 |
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Apart from a few mis-spells .. (I'd happily be your checker *smile* )
The story is WONDERFUL and I really envied Jan.
Please do a follow up?
Thank you Momento. xxx
milly mooe(s) a lot :) (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Jan 4, 2008 |
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nothing in world is better then this type sotry and pony girl stories
(9/10)
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| Reviewer:
H Dean
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Dec 20, 2007 |
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A good story, overall, that only suffered from two things, as I see it. The first is the mediocre technical skills displayed and the second was the lack of further exploration of the process of creation. A bit more would have been quite welcome. Moreover, without the technical gaffes I would rate this story substantially higher, such was the delivery and imagination that went into this tale. Quite a good read - if short. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
Abe Froman
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Jul 4, 2007 |
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Very good, and I really enjoyed the extreme, different nature of some of the modifications, reminding me of the wonderful art of Simon Benson. Well done. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
slaveneedledick
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Jun 11, 2007 |
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Yes very interesting story. Good plot and can go many ways if the write decides. (8/10)
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sirbor
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Jun 11, 2007 |
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Very interesting story. I wonder if they give tours? (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Crowheart
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Jun 10, 2007 |
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I definetly enjoyed this one. An interesting idea, well written and a godd description of the involved emotions... I'd like to read more of that. (9/10)
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