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The Saga of Sue
Author: Master Rick
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(Added on Jun 5, 2007)
(This month 17588 readers) (Total 38886 readers) |
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This is the true story of an very normal woman who descends into BDSM slavery. Each saga will bring one of the story codes into existence. |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
johnnyk62
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Nov 30, 2007 |
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I LOVED this story. I enjoyed the mind play, the doms attention to detail and behind the scenes work.. It is a thinking man's story. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Aug 31, 2007 |
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what i like best on this story is it has a very sweet mixture of eery element, not just non consensual but it flows well and real off er a great perspective of every level of decent
i hope you write more over time (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
subhoney84
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Jun 8, 2007 |
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i need more... please, Sir.... lol..... (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Clevernick
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Jun 6, 2007 |
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Holy shit this is well written. Needs a little proofreading but not distractingly so.
Great descriptions from both sides, convincing and engrossing. Reasons for all things are well explained. Character of both players well-delineated.
Not my type of story but that's not what we're reviewing. Speaking of which: reminder for other reviewers -- please read the reviewing guidelines. "If you have an emotional issue with any particular type of content or gender code, do the author and us a service by not reviewing his or her work unless you can provide a dispassionate review that concentrates on style, writing skill, novelty, etc rather than your personal distaste for its content." (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
J's blu
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Jun 6, 2007 |
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i would rate this story higher if it was edited some more, just a few things detract. as far as content goes - EXCELLENT. the power play is well done, a good mind fuck does amazing things to a slave girl. the changing points of view are good, although i wouldnt want them to be any more frequent.
i look forward to the further details of Master Rick and His slave.
thank Y/you both
blu (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
heycarrieanne
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Jun 5, 2007 |
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Your writing is fine but I have to say the Master in this story seems like a cruel asshole. I sincerely hope it is a fictional "true" story because no deserves to be treated like that in real life. (7/10)
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- Replied by:
Clevernick
(Edit) (Jun 6, 2007)
- Please review the reviewer's guidelines. Your distaste for the characters or their treatment is not supposed to be part of your review, please.
- Replied by:
heycarrieanne
(Edit) (Jun 8, 2007)
- My review rating had nothing to do with my personal feelings. I could have been more forthcoming about the typos and editing issues, but I was nice...for a change.
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